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Post by //:Rain:// on Feb 3, 2007 15:54:34 GMT -5
Hewo. ^^ I'd like some critique on my newest image pwease. XD The font in the background isn't supposed to be easily read.... so don't tell me you can't see it. XD
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Post by Horsegirl on Feb 3, 2007 22:31:40 GMT -5
I love it! Haha, it is very good Rain. There are a few things that could be improved though.
The main text is a little to smeared. Try easing up a little bit on the smearing, or not at all and it should look just fine. The sub-text also looks a little over-smeared which also makes it hard to read.
I adore the colors in the corner. The just give the picture and extra little spurt of attention (I have strange sayings ;D) I love the idea of just blending writing into the background, but if it isn't ment to be read, then try putting it behind the horse. It would look much better if the horse wasn't covered up by the words.
The horse looks great though. Perfect cutting, no complaints there. It kind of looks like it is floating, but because there is no real background scene it is pretty cool.
Try cutting back on the black on the left side, or not put it in there at all. It is very large and draws your attention just to the black a lot. It is cool, but you don't need that much over there.
Overall, the picture looks pretty good. I like it. ;D
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Post by //:Rain:// on Feb 3, 2007 23:16:06 GMT -5
Yay. I wanted suggestions. ^^ I agree about the black, and with the words.
The font is just an effect, 'course I could probably shorten the length of the smear so it wouldn't run into of the next letter. ^^
Thanks horsegirl! [/size]
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Post by Horsegirl on Feb 4, 2007 20:27:53 GMT -5
I'm glad I can help!
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